12.7.05

Photo caption


La mugre me entra
por la boca.

Por fortuna
no he perdido
mis ojos.

ya que veo
a Dios
directo
en la cara.
le
quisiera
preguntar
por qué
me ha abandonado

1 Comentarios:

A la/s mar jul 12, 09:15:00 p. m. 2005, Blogger Ryan dijo...

really eerie feel to this one, for the photo. it gives the reader (me, in this case) an idea on which to base the poem....

It really works well. the simple narration seems almost childlike, but in a good way. (much like how JD Salinger really writes inside the head of Holden Caulfield).

 

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